Rabu, 06 Januari 2016

Final Test Project ( Revision Paragraph)


REVISION PARAGRAPH (Final Test project)
Name   : Maria Ulfah
SRN    : 1401120981
Subject : Writing II

“Tanglong Salikuran”
               Tanglong Salikuran is a tradition event in South Kalimantan. This event very popular in south Kalimantan especially in Banjarmasin city. Tanglong Salikuran or Lanterns parade is a celebration each twenty-one night of Ramadhan. Lanterns are paraded  does not like the ordinary lanterns. The forms and models of  these lanterns are a symbol of Islamic activities. Such as mosque’s miniature, camel, pilgrims, Banjar’s traditional house , drum, and a replica of  burak, etc. To make the Lantern using need some material example : colorful paper, some of cloth, rattan and bamboo as a framework. Most of people in Banjarmasin very like it, because this event very interesting. When we look at the various forms of lanterns and see a variety of colors, it will make us spellbound. We will look the fanfare in whole route of parade. The people who watch this event usually stand in the side of street. This event has held for a long time. They said that Tanglong tradition has existed since the advent of Islam in Banjar. In conclusion, The famous of Tanglong Salikuran does not only caused that event very merry but this event is a tradition since ancient.

-        Lantern       : Portable lamp with a transparent case for a candle or flame
-          Buraq       : a giant bird or according to Islamic tradition, transported the Prophet Muhammad
-        Rattan         : a plant has shaped long and flexible
-        Fanfare       : a noisy of parade
-        Ancient       : belonging to times long ago




Minggu, 03 Januari 2016

Final Test Project


FINAL PROJECT (First draft)
Name : Maria Ulfah
SRN : 1401120981
“Definition paragraph about Tanglong Salikuran”
STEP 1 : Brainstorming using questioning !
1.      What is “Tanglong Salikuran” ?
2.      How familiar of  Tanglong Salikuran for people in Banjarmasin ?
3.      Why “Tanglong Selikuran” is popular ?
STEP 2 : 
Topic Sentence : “Tanglong Salikuran is a special event from South Kalimantan.”

Supporting Sentences :
11.  Tanglong Salikuran is an event that celebration each twenty-one night of Ramadhan.
22. Tanglong Salikuran or Lanterns parade is a celebration each twenty-one night of Ramadhan.
33.   Lanterns are paraded  doesn’t like the ordinary lanterns.

Concluding Sentence : In conclusion, The famous of Tanglong Salikuran doesn’t only caused that event very merry but this event is a tradition since nautical.




STEP 3 : First Draft
“Tanglong Salikuran”
               Tanglong Salikuran is a tradition event in Banjarmasin. Tanglong Salikuran or Lanterns parade is a celebration each twenty-one night of Ramadhan. Lanterns are paraded  doesn’t like the ordinary lanterns. The forms and models of  these lanterns are a symbol of Islamic activities. Such as mosque’s miniature, camel, pilgrims, Banjar’s traditional house , drum, and a replica of  burak, etc. To make the Lantern using need some material example : colorful paper, some of cloth, rattan and bamboo as a framework. Most of people in Banjarmasin very like it, because this event very interesting. We will look the fanfare in whole route of parade. They said that this Tanglong tradition has existed since the advent of Islam in Banjar. In conclusion, The famous of Tanglong Salikuran doesn’t only caused that event very merry but this event is a tradition since ancient.



-        Lantern       : Portable lamp with a transparent case for a candle or flame
-        Buraq          : a giant bird or according to Islamic tradition, transported the Prophet Muhammad
-        Rattan         : a plant has shaped long and flexible
-        Fanfare       : a noisy of parade
-        Ancient       : belonging to times long ago