Writing
Project
“Definition paragraph about Tapai Gambut”
Step
1 : Brainstorming using questioning.
1.
What
is Tapai Gambut ?
2.
How
familiar of Tapai Gambut for people in Banjarmasin ?
3.
How
make “Tapai Gambut” ?
4.
Why
“Tapai Gambut” is popular ?
Step 2 :
Topic Sentence : “Tapai Gambut is a special food from South
Kalimantan.”
Supporting Sentences :
1.
The
tasted of this food is very sweet and sometimes watery.
2.
Like
the other tapai, which is shaped a round and the color is green.
3.
The
sweet taste is product by the fermentation for 3 days.
Concluding Sentence : ” The conclusion, Tapai Gambut is popular
because it has special taste.”
First Draft
”Tapai Gambut”
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Tapai
: a food of Glutinous rice
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Gambut
: a district in South Kalimantan
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Watery
: containing water
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Fermentation
: a metabolic process that converts sugar to acid, gases or alcohol.
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Yeast
: fungus used in making beer wine, or bride rise.
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Katu
: a plant production produce green color
BalasHapusI think it would be nice if more clarified supporting details but includes whole and jugaynuk explanatory sentence must be detailed and if the end of the sentence after point try that sentence by sentence previously disconnected to make it look a whole.
I suggest you do not use contractions like the word " it's ". You must write correctly. Do not forget to add -s / or -es on a plural word in a paragraph that you made. I think you can use : "The conclusion, Tapai Gambut is a popular food that has special taste from Palangka Raya."
BalasHapusi just give you suggestion you can try to create your concluding sentence more conclude your paragraph.
BalasHapus